Friends have a funny way of making sure we are in line weather its through a prank or a simple chat. And they do it through the smallest unnoticeable things we do everyday when we're around them.I learned that the love between friends can never break no matter what, even if it means to play a prank on me. As i wrote this, i couldn't help but laugh and call my friends the whole time through, they inspire me to go to places and do things i thought i could never do, thats a real friend.It wasn't easy remembering every detail of every of this event, but with the help of my friends i was able to trace everything.Writing in general is easy, all you have to do is write honestly and write with your voice. I loved everything about this piece, not one thing about this story told me it was a bad way of telling this memory. At times i struggled trying not to over due any of the parts, but i did outstanding when it came to voice and details. This story was brilliant and a good way to remember this memory.
I am so glad that you enjoyed writing this piece. Your dedication to your friends really shined through in your writing. Just think---when you're old and wrinkly, you will now have this piece to go back to and remember all of the good times with the people you knew way back then (and hopefully will know in the future). I think that's the best part of narrative writing. I think of it as a time capsule---a place to store your memories for the future.
I was born in a small village called Lom. The village is nettled against a mountain range close to the border in Bulgaria. I am adopted. Raised in a unique American home i moved to Michigan from Dallas Texas this past summer to go to Northern Michigan university.
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ReplyDeleteI am so glad that you enjoyed writing this piece. Your dedication to your friends really shined through in your writing. Just think---when you're old and wrinkly, you will now have this piece to go back to and remember all of the good times with the people you knew way back then (and hopefully will know in the future). I think that's the best part of narrative writing. I think of it as a time capsule---a place to store your memories for the future.